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Review Details
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Overall Impression: Good
Content:
Technical Quality of the paper: Good
Originality of the paper: Yes
Adequacy of the bibliography: Yes, but see detailed comments
Presentation:
Adequacy of the abstract: Yes
Introduction: background and motivation: Good
Organization of the paper: Satisfactory
Level of English: Satisfactory
Overall presentation: Good
Detailed Comments:
This is a very interesting position paper that envisions a neural cognitive cycle, combining neural and symbolic computation, to support human-oriented explanations.
The paper overviews some related techniques and methods, and then outlines how these could be used in the provision of a neuro-symbolic cycle from a XAI perspectives, by describing objectives, hypotheses and further challenges.
Overall the paper is well written and easy to read. It provides a nice perspective of neuro-symbolic explainable AI which makes the paper very sensistic for the inaugural issue of the journal.
I have only a few comments about Section 3 and Section 4.
Section 3.
- As far as the objectives are concerned it is not clear (or not well motivated) why Explainability for AI experts and AI stakeholders have been splitted into two objectives. Clearly, the audiences are different and the generation of explanations for these categories will imply to adopt different techniques and methods, nonetheless, O2 and O3 seem to have a shared goal, that is the generation of intelligible explanations for human users.
- Perhaps a graphical representation of the neural-cognitive cycle would enhance the reading.
- Some parts of the text are a bit repetitive.
Section 4.
- It seems to me that H1, H2, and H3 more than hypotheses can be considered enabling techniques, methods and expertises that can be leveraged to support the neural-cognitive cycle discussed in Section 3.
Section 4.1
- What is ILASP?
Minor points:
- pp.2, line 40: [12]or -> [12] or
- pp.2, line 40: [13] ; -> [13];
- pp.3, line 3: [19][20][21] -> [19,20,21]
- pp.4, line 11: compositionality. as -> compositionality as
- pp.4, line 24: known[32] -> known [32]
- pp.4, line 31: and and -> and
- pp.5, line 4: [36][33][37] -> [36,33,37]
- pp.5, line 17: [[25] -> [25]
- pp.5, line 46: the concept of AUC has not been introduced.
- pp.6, line 6-7: [41][42] / [25][26] -> [41,42] / [25,26]
- pp.6, line 14: feedback The -> feedback. The
- pp.6, line 15: should encodes -> should encode
- pp.6, line 30: dom heuristic -> domain (?) heuristic
- pp.6, line 33: layer . Quality -> layer. Quality
- pp.6, line 26: In what follows The remainder of this section -> The remainder of this section
- pp.7, line 46: COMPAS 2 -> COMPAS2 (footnote); also, add last access date
- pp.7, line 47: bad 2 -> bad3 (footnote); also, why not citing it as a reference?
- pp.8, line 1: image 4. -> image.4 (footnote); also, why not citing it as a reference?
- pp.8, line 3: report 5 -> report5 (footnote); also, add last access date
- pp.8, line 19: Advances discusses -> Advanced discussed
- pp.8, line 33: sare known -> are known
References:
Please check references, in particular:
- [3]'s author list should be fixed
- Reference [27] should be corrected, the article was published in the AI Magazine in 2022, and not in 2020.