By Anonymous User
Review Details
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Overall Impression: Good
Content:
Technical Quality of the paper: Good
Originality of the paper: Yes, but limited
Adequacy of the bibliography: Yes, but see detailed comments
Presentation:
Adequacy of the abstract: Yes
Introduction: background and motivation: Good
Organization of the paper: Needs improvement
Level of English: Satisfactory
Overall presentation: Good
Detailed Comments:
The article presents activities related to the development of a Neuro-Symbolic approach for automating IoT device discovery and IoT platform configuration.
I must admit the topic is really interesting despite some flows emerge in the current version.
Nothing is mentioned on possible limitation of the approach. E.g., are Knowledge Graphs of IoT platforms already available? Is that limiting the applicability of the approach?
In the article references to the concept of Digital Twin are reported but the concept is not introduced. Especially consider that DT is a controversial topic that has been attributes several different definitions. The authors should clarify their stand reporting the DT definition they refer to for this paper.
In addition it is not clear why the DT topic is mentioned at all.
It is also not clear why the IoT platform configuration should automatically mimic the physical environment and why IoT devices should be removed from the IoT platform. Why is that relevant?
It is not clear what happens after a device is deleted from the IoT platform. Are all data (also historical data) removed?
It is not clear to me whether ADOxx is open-source. Open-source it has been claimed for all the other components but nothing is mentioned about IoT2Model. Is the IoT2Model open source?
In the approach some assumptions are made such as: "Each of the sensors publishes data to a dedicated topic, allowing subscribers to receive real-time updates." Those assumptions should be better emphasised together with possible limitation of the approach.
Approaches are available in the literature that provide metamodel and support for designing IoT application to be deployed on IoT platform. I notice some similarities to what the authors are presenting here and might be worth a further inspection. I list those that come to mind:
- Corradini, F., Fedeli, A., Fornari, F., Polini, A., Re, B., & Ruschioni, L. (2023). X-IoT: a model-driven approach to support IoT application portability across IoT platforms. Computing, 105(9), 1981-2005.
- Corradini, F., Fedeli, A., Fornari, F., Polini, A., & Re, B. (2022, October). DTMN a modelling notation for digital twins. In International Conference on Enterprise Design, Operations, and Computing (pp. 63-78). Cham: Springer International Publishing.
Section 5 is a bit off. Especially the first paragraph "The discussion aims to both motivate the extension of our approach through IoT2Model and highlight future work regarding the benefits of its utilization within educational settings. The motivation for extending our approach with the IoT2Model method " makes a reader think that the work is not original but it has already been reported elsewhere and what is added in this article is just the IoT2Model. I am confident that this is not the case but in anycase the section should be revised. If the article is an extension that should be stated in the introduction section.
In addition anyone familiar with IoT platform knows that they not only support the registration of devices.
It is not entirely clear to me where the R6+ comes from.
Authors claim that the approach simplifies complex configuration processes. It is not clear whether the approach has been validated therefore it is not clear on what basis the authors can claim that.
I recommend a careful revision before a possible publication.
Minor:
- almost all the quotation mark present issues. In latex the opening mark is different from the closing one. Please fix them everywhere
- Fig. 3. Sniff Loop exit arrow has label "false" but it is not clear the meaning of that.
- Fig. 6 "Atleast two states" --> " At least two states"